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Post by Conleth Tue Oct 04, 2016 10:52 am

Ok so here is an expansion on your idea.

Deshane is a noble. His mother is Dunedain he and his father served and fought in the war of the ring as scouts. His father was killed but he was only wounded and survived. He partially blames what happened on Elessar. He is late 30s/early 40s but looks 25. Calista’s father has discovered that the Princess has been kidnapped and sent s messenger to Gehenna. 

For a price Deshane, known by Calista’s father agreed to go and bring her back. 

Calene wasn’t treated terribly but after she was caught a 2nd time trying to escape her kidnappers she was stripped and birched in front of everyone. Deshane finds her and tries to get her out without bloodshed but she insists that he kill them due to how she was embarrassed and he was forced to kill one or two during their escape. This ofcourse sets them at odds because she wants them dead and he wants to get her back and get paid without needless bloodshed. During the following days things happen and they end up understanding one another and have a moment where she goes after him and he doesn't stop her and they make love. 

When he gets her back safe and sound she kinda keeps him at arms length like they were never close and he thinks she is just playing games like a child and leaves. Later she discovers that he refused the money he was to be paid to find her and realizes the mistake she made in how she had treated him and denied her feelings. 

When her family arrives she tells her mother she is leaving to go find the love of her life and Nauriel tells her no, she has duties to attend...following her mothers advice but surprisingly Elessar tells her to go and find her heart.

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Post by Conleth Tue Oct 04, 2016 11:05 am

His eyes drew over her with an affectionate light. She bore him 6 strong, beautiful children and yet her body was lithe and strong. Her pale flesh was soft and supple in the moonlight and in his own nakedness he sat down upon the chair that was just behind him. Even in the dim light she would be able to see he was ready for her. 

“Come here,” he said in a commanding tone. The images of what they had done in that Inn fueling his need for her right then. Yet he only laid back in the chair and placed his arms on the arm rests casually. Far and away with how hard his heart was beating right then. Every movement Nauriel
made wa graceful and he could see the lines of age in her face and gray in her hair but it only made him want her more right then. She had learned what his body liked and he needed to feel that right then.

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Post by XslvrstarX Tue Oct 04, 2016 12:06 pm

OOC-I like that idea. My only concern is that Calene wouldn't be trained enough to be able to go out and track him down.

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Post by Conleth Tue Oct 04, 2016 12:13 pm

Ooc-she could go with Eldarion and Calista

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Post by XslvrstarX Tue Oct 04, 2016 12:17 pm

OOC-ok that would work. Ready to start a new thread?

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Post by Conleth Tue Oct 04, 2016 12:21 pm

Ooc-sure, leave Arsgorn hangin! I see how you are! J/k. Yep. I  can get to it in a bit. However you could by portraying Calene's abduction? Then I'll chime in with Deshanes intro and the messenger. Let's have it be 8 men and 1 woman who has taken her. List their names in this thread as you use them so we can refer back for them. I am terrible at remembering names as you well know

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Post by XslvrstarX Tue Oct 04, 2016 12:48 pm

Ok it might be a little while in I can get to it. I took today off to help my mom with a few things.

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Post by Conleth Tue Oct 04, 2016 12:58 pm

Ooc- I have a small block of
Time so I'll write something to get us started

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Post by Conleth Tue Oct 04, 2016 1:49 pm

Ooc-new thread milady

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